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Kelly- Inspired!
Posted September 09, 2008 at 9:03 PM

Haven't heard from you in a while, but I guess it's Ok

Since it's like you never cared anyway.

Talk about missing you..ha!...Talk about loving you, you crack me up

I know you want me running behind you..Ha!..I'm an Adams blood, I don't do that stuff!!

I’m also mixed with the Garlands, so you know my mind is strong

Trying to get at me, make me jealous, are you stupid?, dude you know you Wrong!!

Say you represent that Harbour to the fullest, but you already know, I’m a Grand Turk girl

Ain’t no one better than us, you know it, I know it, we the best in the World!!

Say you think you handsome, yeah, I’ll admit that’s true,

But what’s Handsome, if you have no BRAINS, no INTELLIGENCE with it too??

Intelligence isn’t only book smart, it’s thinking for yourself

But no you don’t do that, yah cousin is yah actions and your brother is YOUR MOUTH!!

So stupid, so Naïve, so Idiotic, such a Moron, do you get the point yet??

Thought you were better than this, well you truly had me fooled, did you win your bet??

You MESSED UP, YES you truly MESSED UP and there’s no sorrys or coming back

Thank God I don’t dwell on the Past!, Thank God I live by No Regrets!!

In the beginning, you were so sweet so kind, so loving, so caring

Man, you don’t know, I really had a thing for you, something that you’re not hearing!

I’m more sorry for you, because u know what you lost

Listening to yah cousin, are you crazy? Be yah OWN BOSS!!!

Of course he’s going to tell you all types of sh*t!!!

He’s J-E-A-L-O-U-S can you not see, or are you just that much of a ditz???

Yes-he had me first, he lost me too, don’t make his mistakes, you know you better than him

He’s angry and hurt, can’t understand why I want you and won’t wait on him!

I wanted you, I seriously did

Was willing to fall deep and crazy over you, had a million daydreams lying in my bed!

You were the one I wanted, seriously thought that we could have something real

How could I be so gullible, so stupid, to let you use me like that, it’s just surreal.

Crazy how to me you’re Prince Charming, but the minute yah cousin comes around, you’re so quiet, so shy

Ha!!…talk about Fake, claim you so real, but yet you let yah cousins act for you and just stand by!!

Imma repeat it again, I seriously liked you, I seriously did

But its all in the Past now, can’t care no more, cause to me you’re dead!!!

 

I know you still want me, No doubt

I just want the old personality I met, that took charge of his own mouth!!


 
 
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Jane_Nazrat 419 days ago

So you’re a poet…have you ever heard of poets.com or poetry.com, they are both poet web sites where you share your work and critique each others work and the sites themselves have information to assist you in learning more about poetry , style and basically allows you to advance in your craft. Try it …you might like it!


My review:


definitely good writing and shows a lot of potential…you have skill


Needs stanzas


I was slightly confused at first I thought perhaps it was a conversation back and forth…then I finally concluded that it was a chick (YOU?) with two dudes, him and his cousin whom you had first, never settle for sloppy seconds, or allow yourself to be manipulated into sharing yourself with two friends, so that leads me to post this quote from something that I wrote. Please do not be offended, somehow, I do not think you will be, from your writing you appear to be a bit more real, and can handle it. Note this can play vice a versa. 


Rule of thumb in today’s society, “Tell me that I am sexy and I will show you that I am confident by exposing myself in some public form, tease you for a little while and then show you what I got and to show you that I am in charge, I will tease your brother, jealousy will keep you at my side,  and make you want no other, we won’t use a condom, this shows how true we are, our other playas on the side are clean, we know who they are, I’m no punk or your chump, this has kept you here so far!”


 


 Check out my blogs at the bottom of my blog list I have a few poems that I wrote and of course my book is a book of poetry and I have posted poems throughout the site. 


Peace and God Bless! 


"No Ordinary Jane!"  


 

Re: AAdams 418 days ago

hey thanks for the comment and yeah you were right about the poem that I wrote. Thanks for the advice, and thanks for directing me to that site, i've never heard of it, but I'm definetely going to check it out.

Re: Jane_Nazrat 398 days ago

Hope ur enjoying the sites!


Peace and God Bless! 




 


"No Ordinary Jane!"